Young Writers 2020 Summer Camp,Best Work THE MYSTERY Behind The Epicness!

THE MYSTERY Behind The Epicness!

   By : George Illustrated By: Carl

THE MYSTERY

Behind The Epicness!

          

“Yo, Homies, it’s your new pals George and Carl !” said George “ What up, dogs?” said Carl “We’re in 5th grade now, which means we’re totally mature,

said George “And deep, “said Carl, “I think I might grow a mustache! “ said George “me too !” said Carl squeak squeak squeak “AWESOME!” said George and carl But — our matureness and deepness comes with a high price tag .our new teacher makes us read classic literature! “Fortunately, the books have all been pretty good.” said  George “Don’t you agree, Carl ?” said George  “Well, um…” said Carl “ I didn’t really finish Lord of the Flies,” said Carl. So George said “WHAT!?!?!?!!” “But don’t worry I’ve seen the movies a bunch of times !” said Carl “All what movies ?“ said George “You know “MY Precious!” said carl” LORD oF The FLIES is not The same thing as LORD of the rings !!!!!!!!” said George  “it is int? “ asked Carl “ no!!!!!” said George “ No wonder I flunked the test !” said Carl so George zong back“Well I read it and it inspired me to write a new book.”It is about a mystery” said George. 

                                                            Chapter 1

One sunny day Sarah, 80-HD and Milly woke up because the sun was so bright that it could flash through their dreams “what’s up with the sun so bright?“ said Sarah as she stretched in her bed “I don’t know. “ said Milly the cop “hmm…Well it is a hot day “ said 80-HD the robot “let’s see if Zuzu is awake “ said Milly the whole gang went downstairs to eat breakfast while Sarah checked on Zuzu the poodle. Soon Zuzu was downstairs too Zuzu was hungry the same as Sarah so they ate their breakfast, Milly said “ Where should we go?” as the gang went into a Lamborghini Uranus “let’s go off-roading“said Sarah Zuzu the dog was sitting in milly’s lap while 80-HD searched on the internet he said, “The only safe place to off-road is the desert looking areas .”

                                                          Chapter 2       

“Hm… I think we’re lost “said Milly “me too,” said Sarah “me three, “ said 80-HD “ruff ruff ruff, “ said Zuzu “ where are we ? “ asked Milly, “Nowhere home,” Said 80-HD “Let’s find a gas station in this place,” said 80-HD “ok’ said Milly “well wherein a desert,” said Sarah .”I am going to see how to get out of here” said Milly “I see a ray over there I am going to find what it is Hm….mmm has anyone seen this?” said 80-HD “no” said Milly “no” thanking Zuzu” yes “ said Sarah “where I saw it was last time some guy zapped us with that, we end up here.” “is that so Sarah ?” said Milly “yep, “said Sarah no wonder were Los-” said Milly  “ it is a time travel ray,”  said 80-HD “we can time  travel !” said Milly “yep whelp wherein 0012 years” said 80-Hd a lot of years back .” can you switch modes,” asked Milly “yes you can “ answers 80-HD “so let zap up along the car and get back our year,” said Milly “o.k,” said 80-HD 

                                                     chapter 3

Zap! “where are we now?” said Sarah “I don’t know, “said Milly “where is 80-” said Milly “I am over here “thoughts 80-HD “we are in the year 2020 back to normal, “ said 80-HD when suddenly CRASH!  “what was that ?!” cried Sarah “let’s hide, “ said Milly to the gang “o.k.” said 80-HD wowowowowowowowowow “it is the cops they need me! “ said Milly “o.k.” said 80-HD “WOW look at Milly go!” said Sarah “now Milly is jumping on a motorcycle and doing her job!”  “she is good, “said 80-HD “yep,” said Sarah” but uoho ZAP! that is the guy.

                                                     chapter 4

Zap!!Zap! ZAP!ZAP!ZAP!ZAP!ZAP!ZAP!ZAP!ZAP!ZAp!Zap!Zap!zap!zap!zap! 

                                            make a long story short 

                                                       ZAP!

                                            The ending of the story  

BUT WAIT… … if you thought our adventure was over now, George and carl are busy reading another old-fashioned book getting awesome new-fashioned ideas and desperately trying to figure out how to remove permanent marker from their faces before their moms find out! “KEEP SCURBING  !” “I AM “ do get ready for the next epic tale of maturity and depth!! Because an all-new MYSTERY novel is coming !!

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